Thanks for the post. I'm not sure why I forgot to explain (A) the first time.
As a reminder, this is what we're looking for
Conc: W was likely a factor in causing Z.
Premises:
i. W and Z are correlated
ii. W is known to cause X / X is known to cause Y.
(assumption: Y is pretty relevant to Z)
How does (A) stack up?
Conc:
W was likely a factor in causing Z
(some factor was probably affecting birds and events)
This is already different from the original, because the conclusion is saying that "some factor" was affecting
two things: the birds and the events.
In the original argument's conclusion, we had a causal factor (sunspot) affecting ONE thing (uprisings).
In the original argument, the causal factor (sunspot) was correlated with something else (positive ions in the air) in the evidence.
In (A), is the causal factor (some factor) correlated with something else in the evidence?
No. We haven't even heard about this "some factor" until the conclusion.
The original argument told us stuff about sunspots in the evidence.
(A) tells us nothing about "some factor" in the evidence.
The argument in (A) is something more like this:
Ppl used X to predict Y.
Since the predictions were often correct,
we can conclude that some thing, Z, affected X and Y.