What a heart-wrenchingly good, yet impossible question!
I cannot actually explain my realtime thought process, because a lot of what the brain does is spontaneous and intuitive and not something we can fully author or direct.
I've read
a lot of LSAT.
There are no absolutes in LSAT. Or it seems like there aren't, at least. Certain examples of questions seem to require styles of thinking that were punished in other problems.
For example, you're scared to go from "calling it 'implausible' was unwarranted" to "it, in fact, IS plausible".
That feels like a "Failure to prove vs. proof of failure" flaw.
But I think saying an accusation is unwarranted is not the same as saying it's unsupported.
Warranted criticism is deserved criticism. So unwarranted criticism is "undeserved criticism". If I say that something didn't deserve that criticism, that suggests that I hold a positive opinion as to the proper critique, not just a rejection of the critic's attempt to build an argument.
Would I ever say these ridiculous thoughts to myself during the test? Heavens, no. This is the analytical stuff that comes out when you're asked to explain your intuition.
So, yes, you could probably add a rule that says "criticism was unwarranted" = "criticism is wrong".
But I wonder if feeding you my retroactively contrived 'rules' is worse than you just developing and trusting your judgment when it comes to how you should interpret that conclusion, on THIS question.
I'm not sure what you saw as the immediate trouble in referring to everyone's opinion on the book, when the conclusion is essentially evaluating an opinion on the book.
Since we're debating the merits / plausibility of a book, we CAN'T really hope to refer to any quantitative data to prove our point. We'd really have to resort to our opinion or those of others.
In the last sentence, I took the author to be saying that this was his impression of the book and that he would expect that everyone else who has read this book would share this impression.
In terms of (B), it is not a flaw to me.
Fails to consider / ignores possibility / neglects possibility
is only a correct answer if the idea it mentions would WEAKEN.
When you see these answers, just ask yourself, "if true, would it weaken?"
(B) says, "People can agree about something, but be WRONG. So maybe people could agree this novel is plausible, but be WRONG, and the critic is right to say that the novel is implausible."
That would definitely weaken the argument.
Unfortunately, people did NOT agree this novel is plausible. They (hypothetically) agreed that EACH INCIDENT is plausible. So if they're wrong about that, they're not dealing with our conclusion. They're not addressing whether the WHOLE NOVEL is plausible. So the move (B) tries to make gets us from Premise to anti-premise, not Premise to anti-Conclusion.
Hope this helps.