by RonPurewal Thu Aug 28, 2008 6:58 am
i'm actually going to dissent from all the other opinions here and vote for (e).
(a) and (b) are wrong, wrong, wrong; you don't need to read any further than the first 5-6 words of each. in both cases, the comparison is invalid: they start out with "unlike most warbler species...", and then begin the following clause with something other than another warbler species.
remember, COMPARISONS NEED TO BE EXACTLY PARALLEL.
the only thing that we can compare to one species of bird is another species of bird. both (a) and (b) fail that particular acid test.
(c) is wrong because the ostensibly parallel construction isn't, well, parallel enough. if the first half of the construction is "those in most warbler species," then the second half MUST be "______ in this-or-that species." this choice isn't written that way.
the standard for parallelism in this sort of construction is set very high indeed.
(d) is pretty ridiculous. no one here picked it, so i trust that i don't have to spell out what's wrong with it.
if any readers want to know, post back and i'll explain in more detail.
(e), on the other hand, is the best of the 5 choices here:
* perfect use of the construction "in that": this construction LIMITS the meaning of the foregoing words. in other words, the following text "it is very difficult to ..." explains precisely in what way the blue-winged warblers are "unlike most other species of warbler".
* no issues with parallelism - and no issues with pronouns (see below)
* this type of 'it' construction is extremely common in english. for instance: 'it was impossible to tell what would happen next', 'it is obvious that you're upset', etc.
this is not a pronoun error. if you absolutely must assign a referent, then choose the entire following noun clause (e.g., "that you are upset" in the second example) - but it's better just to familiarize yourself with the construction, as the gmat will of course never ask you to point out the specific referent of a pronoun.
there are alternative constructions that avoid the use of 'it' in these cases, but they usually sound excessively stilted or literary (e.g., "that you are upset is obvious").
to the original poster: PLEASE post the official answer. thank you.