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* The most common reasons for an employee’s unwillingness

by Siddzy Mon Nov 03, 2008 11:03 am

The most common reasons for an employee’s unwillingness to accept a transfer are that mortgage rates are high, housing in the new location costs more, and the difficulty of selling the old home.

(A) that mortgage rates are high, housing in the new location costs more, and the difficulty of selling the old home
(B) that mortgage rates are high, housing in the new location costs more, and that it is difficult to sell the old home
(C) high mortgage rates, the greater cost of housing in the new location, and that the old home is difficult to sell
(D) high mortgage rates, the greater cost of housing in the new location, and it is difficult to sell the old home
(E) high mortgage rates, the greater cost of housing in the new location, and the difficulty of selling the old home

I understand y E is right , but even option B is parallel. If so wat is the error in B
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by san Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:47 pm

In B - and that it is difficult to sell the old home

That is not required.
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by SAN Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:48 pm

In B - 'it ' is invalid referent
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by VP Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:24 pm

My friend E seems better than B because it uses parallel noun phrases, while in B the verb phrases used are not exactly parallel and use the "it" which has no antecedent.

thanks!
~VP
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Please post question source

by esledge Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:47 pm

Please cite the source (author) of this problem. We cannot reply unless a source is cited. In addition, if no source is cited, we will have to delete the original question, despite the great discussion that has already taken place. Thanks.
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