I have a question about tense however it is in the Modifiers Strategy Chapter on pg. 76 of the 2007 Strategy Guide. The section mentions introducing a relative pronounto avoid awkward sentences. Example:
We test-drove a car having engine trouble.
We test-drove a car that had engine trouble.
Doesn't the tense in this sentnce change if we insert THAT and change having to had?
And is that ok?