both are verbs with "the population of japan" as subject. perfectly parallel.
what makes you think they aren't parallel?
RonPurewal Wrote:phuonglink Wrote:i have 2 questions related to this sc:
1. can these points be used to eliminate incorrect options?
(A) wrong modifier: "Shrinking....,projected decline. It is Japan's population that is shrinking
(B) +(D) I eliminated B,D because B,D compares Japan's population with other nations. Is this a compelling point to eliminate B and D?
(E): 'decline at" is unidiomatic
yes, yes, and yes.2. Please teach me when we can use "decline by" or "decline of"?
"decline by" is used with the VERB "decline", and is followed by some sort of quantitative measure of the decline in question:
the number of applicants to school X has declined by 20% this year.
"decline of" is used with the NOUN "decline", and is followed by whatever is actually declining. idiomatically, this expression *can* describe literal declines in quantitative measurements, but is more often used to describe a figurative "decline", i.e., a fall from importance or prominence.
the decline and fall of the roman empire took place primarily during the centuries after the reign of constantine.
RonPurewal Wrote:yes, but i can't guarantee that those are the only usages.
also, you can't cross out a choice just because 'decline' occurs next to 'at'. if these two words are parts of separate constructions, the sentence can still work.
Accountants often go on vacation in May and June, because their workload tends to decline at that time of year.
(correct sentence)
note that 'decline at' is NOT a phrase here. you have two separate pieces:
their workload tends to decline (this is a sentence all by itself)
...at that time of year (a modifier of that sentence)
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on the other hand, if a sentence is actually trying to say 'decline at [number]' as a single thought, then, yes, that would be unidiomatic.
RonPurewal Wrote:You're right that "intention to sustain..." is unidiomatic; that error alone justifies elimination.
However, it's unlikely that a GMAC problem would turn on this sort of idiom alone. Here, you also have a meaning that doesn't really make sense.
Here's what is actually happening in the situation described in the sentence:
* The state makes deposits into a fund.
* That fund is intended to sustain the state's economy"”in the future, once (a) the state's oil reselves are depleted and, presumably, (b) the fund has reached a certain size.
The deposits are not directly intended to sustain the Alaskan economy, so the phrasing of that choice doesn't make literal sense.
(Remember"”you NEVER have to make this kind of decision in isolation. All that's necessary is to notice that the correct answer makes much better literal sense than this one.)
RonPurewal Wrote:FanPurewal Wrote:hi instructors
i want to make sure whether the only issue in E is unidiom usage of *decline at*?
thank you!
The modifier doesn't make sense as a modifier.
The main sentence says that Japan's population IS shrinking. I.e., it's discussing something that is happening at present.
A projected decline is in the future. So, "with a projected decline" can't be used as a modifier, since the future doesn't describe the present.
Note that the correct answer handles the situation by linking two different verbs——in two different tenses——with "and". No modifier.
RonPurewal Wrote:these are both general observations:
* this kind of stinger (IN GENERAL) stays where it is inserted.
* thus, the act of stinging (IN GENERAL) causes xxxxxxx.
these observations—like other general observations (e.g., The sun sets in the west, Blood circulates throughout the human body)—are not confined to a specific timeframe.
so, you have 'timeframe-independent general observation #1' and 'timeframe-independent general observation #2'.
matching?
yes.
HM537 Wrote:I can't understand why this "with" midifier is used to describe things that are contemporaneous with main clause. "are using" is present and "plummeting" is a previous thing in the last year. why are they simultaneously?
by the way, if "with+ " is placed at the beginning of the clause, should it apply to the subject of the main clause? like verb-ing or verb-ed modifiers?
RonPurewal Wrote:HM537 Wrote:I can't understand why this "with" midifier is used to describe things that are contemporaneous with main clause. "are using" is present and "plummeting" is a previous thing in the last year. why are they simultaneously?
if the cost is still decreasing, that interpretation makes sense.