Greetings,
Can you please review this analysis of the argument. I fell short of time with this. So I am not very sure about its quality particularly towards the end.
Some tips regarding the pacing would be of immense help.
Thanks and Regards,
Nachiket
ESSAY QUESTION:
The following appeared in an article in a human resources magazine:
"Six months ago, in an experiment aimed at boosting worker productivity, Company Z started providing free gourmet lunches to its employees. The Company hoped that these office lunches would encourage employees to remain in the building during lunch-hour and motivate employees to work harder throughout the day. A survey found that soon after the lunch program was implemented, the average number of hours worked by most Company Z employees increased dramatically. During this same period, the Company's profits also increased substantially. Thus, it is safe to say that the lunch program was a huge success and that Company Z should make the program permanent."
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. Point out flaws in the argument's logic and analyze the argument's underlying assumptions. In addition, evaluate how supporting evidence is used and what evidence might counter the argument's conclusion. You may also discuss what additional evidence could be used to strengthen the argument or what changes would make the argument more logically sound.
YOUR RESPONSE:
The author of this passage tries to prove that more the time spent by an employee in the office building, the more is his/her productivity and that more the productivity, more the company's profits. He mentions a survery which concludes that providing of free gourmet lunches to the employees leads to their higher productivity. However, his reasoning is seriously flawed because he does not mention how many emoployees brought lunch boxes and ate in the office building. Further, he also fails to prove that time spent by the employees during lunch time is the prime factor of the low productivity.
Moreover, he does not mention if the employees were mandated to eat the lunch provided by the company. This seriously undermines the suvey result because if many people did not eat the free gourmet lunch, it could not be the prime reason for increased productivity or for increased profits.
Firstly, the author assumes that all employees have lunch outside the office. His reasoning is that the employees spend too much time having lunch and hence providing free goumet lunch will prevent people from getting out of the office building. Further, he assumes that no lunch was already being provided before employment of the mentioned free lunch. These assumptions are seriously undermined by the fact that, employees could be bring lunch boxes to the office and this would result in very little time spent on lunch.
Secondly, the author assumes that the employees dont waste any time apart from that spent during the lunch hours. He does not provide any evidence to prove this point. This assumption can be strongly refuted by arguing that the employees could spend their time over coffee in the evening, or in a meeting which may not lead to any conclusion. The argument could be strengthened by providing some information about the ways in which employees of company Z could spend their time.
Thirdly, the author only mentions that the company provided free lunch. However, he or the survey data misses the number of people who actually have this lunch. This figure is very much required because, it might be possible that company provided free lunch but nobody eats there. In this scenario, the increased productivity and the profits of the company cannot be attributed to this scheme.
Finally, the author could strengthen his argument by providing some statistical information about the number of employees who have taken up this lunch scheme, the number of employees who bring lunch boxes and the number of employees who still go outside the building for lunch. In addition, he could also provide the information about then number of ways in which employees could spend and waste their time in company Z. All these evidences and statistics could favor the authors argument of making the lunch scheme permanant in company Z.
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Source : Manhattan GMAT Practice Test.