Parallelism

[sonu_gmat]

1.
'.....could mean less lending by..... and increasing the pressure.....'
Here I understand increasing is a participle and increasing the pressure is a phrase. So it is not parallel to less lending. As per OG increasing (participle) introduces a phrase. To me in this sentence placement of "˜the’ makes it a phrase. Does ing form always act as a participle. It can act as adjective too. Please correct me if I’m wrong here.

Could mean less lending by..... and increasing pressure.....
Is not increasing here acting as adjective. What is wrong in this construction? It looks parallel to me.

Could mean less lending by..... and the increasing pressure.....
What is the problem here? I agree "˜the’ indicates something is mentioned before. If we ignore that will it be a correct construction i.e. parallel to less lending.

Could mean less lending by..... and increased pressure.....
This is the correct answer.

I hope I could put my question properly. Thanks.

[RonPurewal]

1.
'.....could mean less lending by..... and increasing the pressure.....'
Here I understand increasing is a participle and increasing the pressure is a phrase. So it is not parallel to less lending. As per OG increasing (participle) introduces a phrase. To me in this sentence placement of "˜the’ makes it a phrase. Does ing form always act as a participle. It can act as adjective too. Please correct me if I’m wrong here.

Could mean less lending by..... and increasing pressure.....
Is not increasing here acting as adjective. What is wrong in this construction? It looks parallel to me.

Could mean less lending by..... and the increasing pressure.....
What is the problem here? I agree "˜the’ indicates something is mentioned before. If we ignore that will it be a correct construction i.e. parallel to less lending.

Could mean less lending by..... and increased pressure.....
This is the correct answer.

I hope I could put my question properly. Thanks.

2.
X are visible as .... but have never been sighted .......

As per OG, adjective 'visible' is complement and parallel to past participle 'sighted'. Can you please explain this.

X is an interwoven filigree of mashrooms ......and extends for more than.....

This is little modified version of OG Q. Is parallelism OK here? Does 'is' make 'extends' non parallel.

X is good and doing well.
I guess this is wrong parallelism. Since 'is' in the first is 'be' verb and in the second auxiliary. Please explain.

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[sonu_gmat]

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[RonPurewal]

yeah, no, you can't post OG problems here. in fact, you shouldn't even post fragments of OG problems.

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[sonu_gmat]

Ron,

Sorry for any inconvenience caused. I did not put these Q's intentionally in this folder. I was in general verbal Q folder.While searching for some Q I entered in this folder without my knowledge. However, this Q which is part of OG also appears in the power prep s/w. So I guess now there should not be any problem with this Q. I've the snaps with me. I can upload it as proof. So again I'm putting the Q back. I really appreciate all your detailed replies.


The decision by one of the nation's largest banks to admit to $3 billion in potential losses on foreign loans could mean less lending by commercial banks to developing countries and increasing the pressure on multigovernment lenders to supply the funds.
(A) increasing the pressure
(B) the increasing pressure
(C) increased pressure
(D) the pressure increased
(E) the pressure increasing

'.....could mean less lending by..... and increasing the pressure.....'
Here I understand increasing is a participle and increasing the pressure is a phrase. So it is not parallel to less lending. As per OG increasing (participle) introduces a phrase. To me in this sentence placement of "˜the’ makes it a phrase. Does ing form always act as a participle. It can act as adjective too. Please correct me if I’m wrong here.

Could mean less lending by..... and increasing pressure.....
Is not increasing here acting as adjective. What is wrong in this construction? It looks parallel to me.

Could mean less lending by..... and the increasing pressure.....
What is the problem here? I agree "˜the’ indicates something is mentioned before. If we ignore that will it be a correct construction i.e. parallel to less lending.

Could mean less lending by..... and increased pressure.....
This is the correct answer.

I hope I could put my question properly. Thanks.

[sonu_gmat]

Ron,

Can you please reply to this one please....

and comment on this post.

http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/posting.php?mode=post&f=2

[RonPurewal]

'.....could mean less lending by..... and increasing the pressure.....'
Here I understand increasing is a participle and increasing the pressure is a phrase. So it is not parallel to less lending. As per OG increasing (participle) introduces a phrase. To me in this sentence placement of "˜the’ makes it a phrase. Does ing form always act as a participle. It can act as adjective too. Please correct me if I’m wrong here.

if you say increasing pressure, then "increasing" is an adjective, modifying the noun "pressure".
if you say increasing THE pressure, then this is a participial phrase. (here "increasing" is disqualified from being counted as an adjective, because adjectives can't precede "a/an/the".)

Could mean less lending by..... and increasing pressure.....
Is not increasing here acting as adjective. What is wrong in this construction? It looks parallel to me.

that would be fine, since "less lending" and "increasing pressure" are both adjective + noun.

however, this is not one of the answer choices.

choice (a) contains increasing THE pressure, which is nonparallel to "less lending" for the reasons specified above.

Could mean less lending by..... and the increasing pressure.....
What is the problem here? I agree "˜the’ indicates something is mentioned before. If we ignore that will it be a correct construction i.e. parallel to less lending.

correct.
"the" is the only problem here. but it's a substantial problem.

Could mean less lending by..... and increased pressure.....
This is the correct answer.

yes.

[mr.mysterio4u]

But Ron isn't less lending (adjective + -ing form ) a complex gerund, which can only be parallel to other complex gerund, in this case, the increasing pressure on government (the/a/an + -ing form + preposition -other complex gerund-)

Please advice where am I committing a mistake ??

[RonPurewal]

But Ron isn't less lending (adjective + -ing form ) a complex gerund, which can only be parallel to other complex gerund, in this case, the increasing pressure on government (the/a/an + -ing form + preposition -other complex gerund-)

Please advice where am I committing a mistake ??

i'm sorry, but i don't know what a "complex gerund" is.
in any case, the analysis here isn't correct; the second part ("the increasing pressure...") is an ADJ + NOUN construction. in that construction, "increasing" is an adjective, not a gerund, and it modifies the noun "pressure".

[gaur.vitul]

Hi Ron,

Could you please explain me what is the difference between the increasing pressure and increased pressure.

[jlucero]

Increasing (happening) vs increased (already happened)

The increasing pressure in the tire will soon cause it to rupture.
The increased pressure in the tire caused it to rupture.

[AmmuS624]

'.....could mean less lending by..... and increasing the pressure.....'
Here I understand increasing is a participle and increasing the pressure is a phrase. So it is not parallel to less lending. As per OG increasing (participle) introduces a phrase. To me in this sentence placement of "˜the’ makes it a phrase. Does ing form always act as a participle. It can act as adjective too. Please correct me if I’m wrong here.

if you say increasing pressure, then "increasing" is an adjective, modifying the noun "pressure".
if you say increasing THE pressure, then this is a participial phrase. (here "increasing" is disqualified from being counted as an adjective, because adjectives can't precede "a/an/the".)

Could mean less lending by..... and increasing pressure.....
Is not increasing here acting as adjective. What is wrong in this construction? It looks parallel to me.

that would be fine, since "less lending" and "increasing pressure" are both adjective + noun.

however, this is not one of the answer choices.

choice (a) contains increasing THE pressure, which is nonparallel to "less lending" for the reasons specified above.

Could mean less lending by..... and the increasing pressure.....
What is the problem here? I agree "˜the’ indicates something is mentioned before. If we ignore that will it be a correct construction i.e. parallel to less lending.

correct.
"the" is the only problem here. but it's a substantial problem.

Could mean less lending by..... and increased pressure.....
This is the correct answer.

yes.

I am sorry I am not able to narrow down to choice C. When first I saw this problem, I got panic how to solve this. All choices looks same. If we are seeing parallelism then are not we missing BY in answer choice, for example we have ...less lending by... in argument but we do not have ..by..in answer choice.
Also I could not understood what is the issue with ..THE.. in b, d and e choice.

When first i saw answer choice, i eliminated choice C . I thought (less lending) is not parallel to (increased pressure).

Could you pls help me how can I to narrow down to correct choice within short span of time.

Regards,
Ammu

[tim]

WHY did you think "less lending" was not parallel to "increased pressure"? "increased pressure" is the ONLY one that is parallel in fact, and if you look at the PARTS OF SPEECH that are used, that's the clue.

As for not being able to see the differences, I respectfully submit that you are not telling the truth. If someone offered you $1000 to find SOMETHING different among the answer choices, you would find them, I promise! The differences are there and are obvious, even if you can't articulate them beyond the fact that there are different letters of the alphabet!

[RonPurewal]

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