Nine months after the county-GPrep SC

[RonPurewal]

It's hard for me to tell exactly what you are asking.

[JaneJ740]

Hello,
Would it be right if C wrote as "that it violates state laws that allow"?

And would this "that it violates state laws that allow" better than D?

[jlucero]

Hello,
Would it be right if C wrote as "that it violates state laws that allow"?

And would this "that it violates state laws that allow" better than D?

Your modified sentence is correct.

Keep in mind that every GMAT questions has one right answer and four wrong answers. There are no better or worse right answers. D is right, so nothing can be better than it on the test (even if you may prefer to write it a different way in your own mind, or there's an alternative option that gives a slightly different meaning that's also correct).

[eggpain24]

HI，ron

in choice B

is it the infinitive create some sort of meaning like the one below？

A judge overturn sth. to allow the use （showing the purpose）

I think this meaning is fine = =

The primary mistake here is unidiomatic expression and the pronoun “their”

correct me if I am wrong

[RonPurewal]

No, that meaning isn't fine.
In that interpretation—in which "to allow xxxx" applies to the judge's actions—the specific nature of the "state laws" is left completely unspecified.

[eggpain24]

No, that meaning isn't fine.
In that interpretation—in which "to allow xxxx" applies to the judge's actions—the specific nature of the "state laws" is left completely unspecified.

got it~

thanks Ron

[tim]

:)

[RonPurewal]

More generally—
If modifiers are moved around to different places in the different answer choices:
• Think very carefully about which things describe which other things.
• Pick choices that place those pairs of things as close together as possible.