RonPurewal Wrote:the way you should process choice (c) is
It is an oversimplified view of cattle raising to say that all one has to do with cattle is
leave them alone while they feed themselves
and then
corral them and drive them to market when the time is ripe
RonPurewal Wrote:choice (d) doesn't actually say that; it attempts to take the three verb forms and place them into a parallel list.
however, placing these three into a list is just as illogical as what you have cited here, since these three ideas are not all parallel to each other.
namely, "leave them alone" should appear by itself -- since this is the only thing you do with the cattle before they are ready for the market -- but then "corral" and "drive" should be parallel to each other, since those are two immediately sequential actions that occur when the cattle are ready for the market.
RonPurewal Wrote:in addition, i have a very strong suspicion that the word "thing" will ALWAYS be incorrect when it appears -- it is extremely informal/colloquial and can always be replaced, in any context, by a better and more specific noun.
Thank you so much Ron for these insights.
RonPurewal Wrote:you can't treat the sentence as though all three elements are in a list together, because ... they aren't.
(and, as you have accidentally pointed out, the punctuation of the sentence GUARANTEES that these items are not all part of the same list.)
You mean "
absence of punctuation in the sentence GUARANTEES that these..." right??
tim Wrote:okay so i've been talking to Ron about this offline, and although we haven't come to a full agreement on what is required in this sentence (he and i have different interpretations that both lead to C as a correct answer, which is all that really matters!)
Is that so? I thought ruling out any answer choice, especially on PRACTICE questions, on a wrong premise may be good for that particular question but fatal for others. Isn't ruling out a particular choice for a solid reason vital?
RonPurewal Wrote:commit.gmat Wrote:D: Is there anything grammatically wrong with choice D or is it just bad because it is in passive voice.
the biggest problem with choice (d) is "...is leave..."
that is an attempt to create an infinitive, WITHOUT using "to".
that would be fine IF there were another infinitive somewhere else in the sentence, containing "to" (to which this one could be parallel), but there isn't.
RonPurewal Wrote:sudaif Wrote:ron - what do you mean by the need for the infinitive "to" elsewhere in the sentence to ensure parallelism? what makes you say that?
well, consider the context in which this verb form appears:
"all one has to do with cattle is _______"
in context, it should be clear that the blank should be filled with a noun -- or, at least, with something that plays the role of a noun. in this case, that must be an infinitive. if you just make a list of
verbs in this context, that's ungrammatical.
in a list of infinitives, it's fine if the second and later entries don't repeat the word "to" -- "to VERB1, VERB2, and VERB3" -- but you
must have the "to"
somewhere.
Tried multiple times, read all the replies, but could not understand this TO-related error in (D) i.e. how is (C) different from (D) as far as usage of TO is concerned?
Also, what is the MAIN error in (D)?
Many thanks