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electricity

by ankurbansal84 Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:53 pm

Hi All

Below is my query from GMATprep

3. In the major cities of industrialized countries at the end of the nineteenth century, important public places such as theaters, restaurants, shops and banks had installed electric lighting, but electricity was in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still provided mainly by candles or gas.
a. Electricity was in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still
b. Electricity was in less than one percent of homes and lighting still
c. There were less than one percent of homes with electricity, where lighting was still being
d. There was less than one percent of homes that had electricity, having lighting that was still
e. Less than one percent of homes had electricity, where lighting had still been

The OA is A. I marked E. why is E wrong?
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Re: electricity

by 2amitprakash Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:08 pm

E is wrong because of the placement of modifier "where lighting ..". This modifier modifies "homes" and must touch the noun. Currently it is nonsensical as the modifier is trying to modify "Electricity".

There can be other reasons too: I suspect for usage of past perfect (lighting had still been) but left it to dissect once found one reason to prove "E" is inferior to "A".
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Re: electricity

by agha79 Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:08 pm

I thought i read in MGMAT guide that "Where" reffers to actuall place. is this true in the corrct answer?
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Re: electricity

by 2amitprakash Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:16 pm

agha79 Wrote:I thought i read in MGMAT guide that "Where" reffers to actuall place. is this true in the corrct answer?

Not only the actual place but a noun place, such as area, site, country, home. Also where should not be used for metaphorical place, such as meeting.
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Re: electricity

by ankurbansal84 Tue Oct 27, 2009 2:22 pm

the OA is A
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Re: electricity

by RonPurewal Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:59 am

2amitprakash Wrote:
agha79 Wrote:I thought i read in MGMAT guide that "Where" reffers to actuall place. is this true in the corrct answer?

Not only the actual place but a noun place, such as area, site, country, home. Also where should not be used for metaphorical place, such as meeting.


this is accurate.

you should only use "where" for a NOUN that represents a PHYSICAL PLACE.
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Re: electricity

by SC312 Fri May 23, 2014 1:33 am

Ron,

What does "where" in A) refer to ?
"one percent of homes" or just "homes" and how does it refer to homes which doesn't have lighting.

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Re: electricity

by RonPurewal Mon May 26, 2014 11:41 am

SC312 Wrote:Ron,

What does "where" in A) refer to ?
"one percent of homes" or just "homes"


The following context describes non-electric methods that were still used to light houses, so, logically, it must be "homes" in general.
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Re: electricity

by RonPurewal Mon May 26, 2014 11:45 am

and how does it refer to homes which doesn't have lighting.

Thanks


- Electricity was only in 1% of homes.
- In homes in general"”clearly not in the ones that had electricity!"”lighting was provided by other means.

Did you think about the context before posting this question?

There's no other reasonable interpretation here. If you read these sentences as though you were encountering them in a book or magazine, you should be able to figure this stuff out very quickly and without any trouble.
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Re: electricity

by SC312 Mon May 26, 2014 2:09 pm

Thanks Ron..

I now get your point.
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Re: electricity

by RonPurewal Thu May 29, 2014 11:08 pm

Excellent.