devansh.anand Wrote:Ron,
I've been messing up comparison/quantity sentences, mostly because I'm too skeptical to use a pronoun in the comparison. I've found that most of the times the pronoun does not have a legitimate antecedent. Can you please cite a few examples, showing how a pronoun (generally that/it/those) should be used in these constructions.
Thanks!
"it" is used to refer to
exactly the same noun, including all attached modifiers, in both parts of the comparison.
e.g.
The air quality in Los Angeles was higher in 2000 than it had been in any of the preceding thirty years.--> correct, since "it" is actually meant to refer to
the air quality in LA and not just
air quality.
"that"/"those" are used to refer to the
noun used previously, but WITHOUT the attached modifiers -- i.e., if the attached modifiers
don't apply anymore when you get to the second half of the comparison.
generally, when this happens, those modifiers/descriptions will be replaced by other modifiers/descriptions/context, in order to lend a reasonable meaning to the comparison.
In 2005, the air quality of Los Angeles was worse than that of Houston.--> correct. here,
that is just
air quality, NOT the air quality of LA.
make sure you can write your own sentences with these constructions; it's not good enough just to recognize them in other people's.