by AZ679 Mon Mar 23, 2015 11:39 am
As a conjunction, doesn't if need to be followed by a clause in formal writings?
For example consider this sentence: ...., if possible.
Would this be correct for GMAT?
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Page 233, Manhattan SC book, 5th Edition:
Right: At current prices, oil in Antarctica may be worth drilling for, if wells can be dug THERE and environmental concerns addressed.
The last part of this sentence seems a fragment to me:
[color=#4000BF]if wells can be dug there[/color]: this part is okay, if + nouns + verb + adverb
and (after this and I expect another complete clause to maintain the parallelism, but we have)
environmental concerns addressed: noun phrase + participle
We can think that the second part is actually a short form of:
[If: understood] environemntal concerns [can be: understood] addressed
But it seems as if the two parts after if are not parallel.
A way to resolve this parallelism would be to have both parts as phrases (though, this changes the meaning because 'can' is omitted) :
, if wells dug there and environmental concerns addressed
(This if + is similar to the if-structure on page 121: Water freezes if cooled to ...)