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ESSAY QUESTION:
"Although the modern information age has opened up channels of communication that never before existed, it, paradoxically, has destroyed the foundation of community by isolating individuals in a technological world that involves little real human interaction."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the position stated above. Support your viewpoint using reasons and examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
YOUR RESPONSE:
I agree with the statement, "although the modern informatino asge has opened up channels of communication that never before existed, it, paradoxically, has detstroyed the foundation of community by isolating individuals in a technological world that involves little real human interaction."
When I first started my undergraduate studies, I joined the ballroom dance club. A few months later I was elected the social chair and I had many responsibilities which involved communicating with the other officers of the club. Not being accustomed checking my email on a regular basis, I actually missed the first several meetings! Not only were the meetings scheduled by email, but many of them were conducted as teleconferences or online meetings. This is one example where new channels of communication isolate individuals in a technological world.
My first job out of college was an engineering position at Motorola. The facility I worked in had about 1,000 employees, and the majority of the engineers sat in cubicles. Each cubicle, naturally, had a computer, which was used throughout most of the day. Motorola had an instant messaging system installed on the computers in order to simplify communication. The instant messaging system was widely used, and employees sitting 20 feet away from each other would actually instant message each other instead of simply walking over to the other cubicle. Software programs such as instant messaging greatly reduce the amount of human contact that individuals receive.
A third example where human contact is reduced due to technological communication development is text messaging on cellular phones. Text messaging greatly simplifies communication, where long telephone conversations are reduced to two sentence messages on a phone. This method of communication removes all aspects of human contact, including the other individual's voice.
In sum, the modern information age has significantly affected the amount of human contact that individuals receive. This has been exemplified by my examples above. Email, instant messaging, and text messaging isolate us and reduce huamn con